How to really stop me in my tracks when I'm reading...

[ximeria]

MO #1
He silently knocked on Jack's door, waiting for a reply he knew he wasn't going to get and waited for all of five minutes before opening the door and stepping inside.
Eh... how do you do that? And what's Ianto doing for those five minutes? Staring at a crack in the wall?

MO #2
Have Jack force Ianto into full intercourse right after the Cyberwoman incident. O,o Seriously, yes, Jack can be a bastard at times, but I can not in any way see him doing that.

MO #3
Let the boys shag up for life -- well, Ianto's anyway, have children and live a domestic 9-5 life, off every other weekend as well. *g* -- Noooooooooooe, don't work for me. I mean, sure, if it's crack-fic on purpose, go ahead, give me mpreg, give me hormonal imballance that mocks any woman ever preggers. If it's in the name of crack? Bring it on *eg*

MO #4
Jack nearly has an aneurysm if Ianto gets a papercut or hangnail...

MO #5
Ianto, self destructive and incapable of taking care of himself.

MO #6
Ianto is naive, and submissive to Jack *rolls eyes*
Have you seen the show? Have you seen how possessive he is when it comes to Jack? How much he seems to be in charge half of the time?

*grins*